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Post by Aldersmaine on Aug 2, 2012 7:39:13 GMT -6
Surely there will be more questions asked.
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Post by Quaddy on Aug 2, 2012 18:59:10 GMT -6
Does this mean we have to type everything about the plot again? *falls over*
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Post by Zephyr Shenkiken on Aug 3, 2012 12:32:43 GMT -6
We don't HAVE to put it all down again lol. It's definitely an option though because I run another one of these proboards forums and it's been up for a good 6 years now I believe so yeah. It's a pretty secure location.
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Post by Aldersmaine on Aug 3, 2012 14:32:42 GMT -6
Only if the same questions are asked by others I think.
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Post by Zephyr Shenkiken on Aug 3, 2012 15:21:53 GMT -6
That sounds about right. Sooooooo how is this shaping up?
I'm seeing Aeon become sort of an adversary at a certain point until he comes around (if he does). His love for Elysia is in fact an obsession so he'd have to fall in love with someone else probably in order to break that hold and yes it would be fitting for him to end up with someone so I have to probably come up with another character since we already have all our writers onboard I believe.
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Post by Quaddy on Aug 3, 2012 16:48:06 GMT -6
I think Wenston still has to join, but I dunno what she has planned. So, yes, you would probably have to create your own character in order to have him fall in love with someone.
As far as being an adversary, it would be best if all that was kept inside the character's head. Rei is certainly not going to announce to anyone that the real reason she's on this trip is to save Shade and destroy the Terracotta spell. Toire might know, by virtue of being her...acolyte, I suppose is the right term, but no one else would. As far as anyone else knew, she'd just be there as a guard. She would know that SOMEONE was working for the Dream Goddess, but not who, and so Aeon would know that someone is working for Shade, but not necessarily who.
It'll only become apparent that Shade is the good guy--I plan on really working him up in everyone's imagination to be evil and scary--a little later. Probably about the same time Aeon realizes he's fighting for a calculating bitch.
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Post by Zephyr Shenkiken on Aug 3, 2012 17:38:03 GMT -6
Yeah it'll definitely be in his head and he's going to be self serving but I plan on him basically 'doublethinking' himself into believing he's doing everything right and not for himself and his own ambitions. Every time he begins to doubt Elysia will visit him in half dreams which is a state I've come up with that he enters when he's exerted himself a lot and is exhausted. Since he can't sleep he basically becomes extremely tired and sleepy to the point of lethargy for a bit and in this state he can hallucinate or be contacted by Elysia.
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Post by Quaddy on Aug 3, 2012 22:09:38 GMT -6
Sounds cool to moi.
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Post by Aldersmaine on Aug 3, 2012 22:15:36 GMT -6
It all sounds good to me!
I warn you Zeph That Toire will probably kiss Aeon at some point during he enemy phase. lol I imagine being kised by a rather manly looking man would shock him out of that super powerful magic dream state lol.
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Post by Zephyr Shenkiken on Aug 4, 2012 9:41:25 GMT -6
LOL yeah it probably would! I hadn't even thought about that as a weakness! That would make total sense that he could be shocked 'awake' from his dream state! Nice one
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Post by Aldersmaine on Aug 4, 2012 10:32:13 GMT -6
Thank you!
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Post by Zephyr Shenkiken on Aug 6, 2012 16:46:14 GMT -6
No problem
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Post by Quaddy on Aug 12, 2012 16:58:28 GMT -6
That would be a really funny scene, actually. And would fit into Rei's plan for Toire, who'd definitely see it as confirmation that he would be a great Head Priest of Shade.
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Post by Aldersmaine on Aug 12, 2012 19:43:35 GMT -6
;D
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Post by Zephyr Shenkiken on Aug 12, 2012 20:09:33 GMT -6
Lol yeah I can see it being a pretty amusing scene coming off of a serious one.
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Post by Matt on Sept 17, 2012 18:25:00 GMT -6
I think I missed out on a lot of talk didn't I. Anywhere I can catch up on all this because right now, reading this, it's like I've been given an info-booklet only it's just the back page that's in tact.
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Post by Aldersmaine on Sept 17, 2012 19:54:52 GMT -6
Lol... Well ask questions and it'd be easier to inform you. Pretty much though you have free reign of things in regards to your character and how you want them to interact.
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Post by Quaddy on Sept 18, 2012 23:56:42 GMT -6
We really must stop doing this on W.com and not here...
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Post by Aldersmaine on Sept 19, 2012 8:26:01 GMT -6
Oh do have fun trying to read this transcript lol
Oh, Rei. Getting to be Shade's mother and lover at the same time. So very Wiccan of me.
Let's see...I believe that KC's character--the good guy--is the one that gets the whole group together to go on what is essentially a glorified treasure hunt. He also gets to turn what is a dirty, unjust city into a much better place to live. But we really haven't planned much outside of that. I was trying to figure something out for Mynt's character--I was thinking her character could be the one who falls into the Terracotta world for the first time. Kenaz would likely sense that there are people bound into a spell, but he wouldn't necessarily be able to cross over. Someone needs to fall in and see things for how they really are. Aeon will see it in dreams, but he'll see it how the Emperor and Elysia want him to see it--as a paradise where no one grows old, no one gets sick, and everyone dies. But eventually, everyone comes to see it for what it really is: a trap, in which souls are held in stasis for all eternity. The Emperor did it to save them all from a plague--one that even he, a very powerful mage, could not stop, and which was in the process of killing everyone--but now they're trapped.
I think perhaps a convergence is best. Shade sends Rei after Toire, steering Kenaz towards the group, as well. So they meet, they free Toire (perhaps they meet while freeing the slaves), they go their separate ways until they meet again when the Treasure map thing happens? Or do they become friends and stay together? Rei won't let anyone know that she is Shade's acolyte (Lover-to-Be), but I imagine that Kenaz' abilities would clue him in a bit. Toire won't know exactly what's up except that she is tied to Shade somehow (until later), Aeon will be led to believe that she is a mercenary working for the money and that Toire is her assistant. I think it could be cool if Kenaz and Rei have a moment where Kenaz reveals he actually knows what Rei is and even offers to release her, but Rei says no. Part of her wants to, but as the campfire goes on, the longing begins to overtake the distrust and she ends up Shade's Bride in truth. Kenaz could actually narrate that transformation...no ting that the chains begin to disappear the more Rei falls for Shade.
I don't know what else we had planned? -Quaddy
Quaddy, we should work together more often. Oh wait.... More seriously - I think that idea is kind of awesome. And not just because it gives me more context to play with. And I like that Mythos ha ha. Makes me feel all important and stuff.
What's the rest of the context? Is there a plan with more characters than Aeon/Toire/Rei?
And does this mean your character is seeking mine out, Q, or do we want the accidental meet being a sort of less than accident? Are our characters meeting yours B or are you slipping away?
Matt
On 9/18/12 at 4:40pm, Beast Blue wrote:
And thus begins a new Mythos. The Shade of Death God, The Bride-Mother of Shadows, The Grand Dragon of Shades.
On 9/18/12 at 1:20pm, Quaddy wrote:
I like the idea of the big slave trade. Releasing everyone could prove a great way to show Kenaz' tragedy (freeing things at the expense of his Will, which he wants to keep, but not at the expense of leaving things chained), and Rei would see it as a way to free Toire without anyone realizing they were after him. If the slavers knew that someone had come specifically for one Rook slave, they would double down on finding him pronto. But if everyone escaped, Toire could slip away amongst the others.
It seems to me that Kenaz might have a role in releasing the spirits, too. Or even Shade himself. Shade has to be reborn through Rei, right? Maybe he thought releasing the spirits from the Terracotta would be enough, but it isn't? Maybe in order for Shade to die/be reborn after the fight with Elysia, the very belief that people have in him and the way his Cult is twisting his power is preventing him from being reborn. I was trying to figure out why it is that they go around killing young kids all the time (during the ritual death--Shade shows himself for the ones he wants, only he really doesn't, the Cult decides who they want...except for Rei, obviously). Maybe it acts as a sort of binding thing...like Shade can't die because of it. Only Kenaz can free him, knowing it would release the Wild for good, so Shade promises to let him die in return for his help.
Or something. Rei's going to need a friend in the Death Realm besides Shade...she and Kenaz can play checkers. -Quaddy
Probably not but i have an awkward schedule due to being somewhat on call 24/7.
Dyne would likely have a large slave market for sure. Hell perhaps Toire's more aggressive nature all of a sudden is related to Kenaz being near. After all Toire's nature of the Blue word in his blood (one of the top reasons the Rook are solitary to their own race) tends to cause him to reflect magics regardless of their forms. Having Kenaz near him would most certainly cause his more wild urges to surface easier, if not out of control at one point or another. Ooh possible plot twist yay!
On 9/18/12 at 11:57am, Matt - HOME SWEET HOME wrote:
From what I can see we have a couple ways of going about this. Either Rei approaches Kenaz when she discovers his presence in Dyne, seeking him out, persuading him to help because she knows that his very nature cannot deny freedom. Or we imagine there's some kind of big underground slave market that Toire's ended up in (or something) and both Rei and Kenaz know about this, their paths coinciding by accident but essentially forcing themselves to work together in order to NOT get in each others way.
The difference between the two I suppose is that Kenaz would want to free everyone he could - he'll be calling upon his Will which draws upon Song and takes him close to Wildness. It's a tricky business sometimes. On the other hand, from what you've said I imagine that Rei is just after Toire? Do correct my assumptions etc.
Also beastie... you were up very very late/early or are you in a different timezone to the rest of them?
Matt
On 9/18/12 at 5:32am, Beast Blue wrote:
Oh Quaddy, ever there eloquent. Thank you so much for being able to summarize that so superbly! What do you both need from Toire to make this work? He's very mailable right now in my head.
On 9/18/12 at 3:57am, Matt - HOME SWEET HOME wrote:
Yeah I pretty much have no background for this one. It's like those olde campfires of yore when you don't correspond and just go with it right now for me. Same with Anti Hero only I've been fixed on the board to get that one in my head.
Right so Death vs Dreams. That's an interesting one. I was going to say that being an immoral dragon/fae hybrid, Kenaz would actually quite like to die. He's somewhat stuck between Reason and Wildness - I wonder if that can parallel with Death and Dream. There's a line repeats for himself, that when nothing of him still exists, he hopes someone remembers him - because he knows that at this rate, he'll become the dragon and he'll be lost to the wild. I assumed I'd end up 'killing him off' eventually as he uses too much magick and becomes the beast. So yes, he'd match up with your character and Toire to say a grand fuck you to the slavers, he'd also be willing to help them if it meant he thought he might be able to die instead of becoming Wild.
Of course, I'm flexible if none of that works.
If it does then maybe we could work on your next steps and my next steps together Quaddy my dear?
Matt
On 9/18/12 at 12:53am, Quaddy wrote:
Allo y'all. Yes, the plan for this addition is for Rei to come across the slavers, pushed there by Shade. I dunno how much you know about the overall plot, Matt, so I don't know how much we have to explain. And how we're going to work your character into it. Basically, the story is a huge clash between the God of Death (Shade) and the Goddess of Dreams (Elysia). The Terracotta is a spell that's keeping everyone affected by it trapped in a pocket realm, which is essentially a long term dream state. This means that the Dream Goddess is strengthening herself at Shade's expense, since those souls are being prevented from dying. The Emperor took advantage of one of Shade's rebirths (the God of Death must die in order to experience his own realm and reaffirm death's hold over the world) to weave the spell (perhaps at Elysia's prompting), the Goddess is taking advantage of the power shift to strengthen herself, and the Cult of Shade is taking advantage of Shade's imbalance to streng then their political hold. So basically Shade wants to break the spell in order to return balance to the world, bring himself back into balance, and purge his Cult (which has gotten unruly and downright evil of late). So it comes down to Shade v Elysia, with Rei being Shade's mortal chess piece and Aeon being Elysia's. Toire is Shade's plan to lead the Cult. The Justicar (the good guy who loves law...is that KC's character?) is meant to bring balance back to the city on a human level (and is he the one who finds the map in the first place?). We're sort of working out how to get everyone else involved...
I'm on a Malazan kick. Seriously.
Also, Rei could work with your character (Matt) to free Toire and they could meet that way. Depending on how you wanted your character to be involved. Given his penchant for freeing things, I think he'd want to end the Terracotta spell and free those souls to die, which is what they want (as we learn when we get there). -Quaddy
Hmm, Well Rei might meet up with him this round but if Quaddy isn't able to make that work I'd be more then happy to be saved by you, lol. Honestly I'm winging this as my original plans feel far too slow. Any ideas you have, feel free to state them. I'm sending this reply to Quaddy too so we can pincer attack this motha! ^_^
~Beastie
On 9/17/12 at 8:21pm, Matt - HOME SWEET HOME wrote:
My character would want to free your character. But he won't if you've got ideas for this thing. What's your plan for the next few rounds?
Matt
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Post by Matt on Sept 19, 2012 10:34:48 GMT -6
But then you ask one question that's very simple and then it just spirals out and out.
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Post by Aldersmaine on Sept 19, 2012 16:40:48 GMT -6
That fact that it does is a good sign though. Enthusiasm = good.
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Post by Aldersmaine on Sept 19, 2012 16:44:48 GMT -6
Dragoon362: Can I just double check. The Terracotta is a spell? And then the city it was cast upon was Denundhael. And we're going to get roped into finding the city which will lead to the revelation of the Terracotta? Or something? Why would we end up roped into Embry's quest though. Is there going to be a trigger that means we end up going to same way or whim?"
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Embry is... An Enigma currently. I think we're going to have to wait and see what moves he makes this round before making any conclusions. Yes Terracotta is a spell, originally used as a means to stop his country/city from dying before he could find a cure, he ended up coming down ill as well and found that under the spell the people lived in a dream version of Denundhael. A dream version he as the spellcrafter could shape.
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Post by Mynt on Sept 19, 2012 16:46:11 GMT -6
This is difficult to read. Someone sum it up pretty for me please. ;D
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Post by Quaddy on Sept 19, 2012 17:23:44 GMT -6
Oi, that *is* difficult to read. Yeah, there is no time to 'splain, so I sum up.
1) The Terracotta is a spell cast by the Emperor upon the Imperial city of Denundhael. He did so because there was a plague threatening to take over that he could not stop, even with his powerful magick, so he cast the Terracotta spell. This spell creates a pocket realm in which no one dies, grows old, becomes sick, etc. Essentially, then, it is a permanent dream and it is, as our characters will learn, a prison for these souls.
2) In order to create this spell, the Emperor relied upon the Goddess of Dreams (Elysia) and the fact that Shade (the God of Death) had just gone through his death/rebirth sequence (he is the only God to have that happen, in order to reaffirm the need for Death in the world), which left him somewhat weak. The spell strengthens Elysia at Shade's expense.
3) This has also caused the Cult of Shade (his priests and priestesses, etc) in Dyne to become corrupt, using their power and the continued unbalance of their God to take over the city and turn it into a den of death and injustice. It is not a nice place to live.
4) Embry, the justicar, will find a treasure map that leads to Denundhael, and our characters will insinuate themselves into the adventure group. Once we get to Denundhael, we eventually come to realize that the Terracotta is a trap for all these souls and that they must be released. Elysia (and, for a time, Aeon...and perhaps a few other characters, if they choose) will try to stop it, but Shade will stand against her (using Rei, Toire, and bargaining with Kenaz to help).
5) The Terracotta will end, releasing those souls and, ultimately strengthening Shade, after some help from Kenaz to free him entirely to be reborn and reaffirm his strength. He will defeat Elysia, trap her (or something), and then overthrow his own Cult (again, with the help of humans), which returns the city of Dyne to peace (in as much as humans ever are peaceful).
Now, someone will have to "discover" that the Terracotta is a pocket realm in which souls are being held captive. Aeon will see it, but he'll see what Elysia wants him to see. I was actually thinking that your character, Mynt, would be perfect to fall into the realm as cats are naturals at getting into places. He would discover the pocket realm, meet the spirits within, and alert everyone.
Did I forget something?
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Post by Aldersmaine on Sept 19, 2012 17:49:14 GMT -6
I'm literally jealous of your summarizing abilities.
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